Eats, Shoots & Leaves

by Lynn Truss
ages: adult (but it’s not inappropriate for anyone really interested in punctuation)
First sentence: “To be clear from the beginning: no one involved in the production of Eats, Shoots & Leaves expected the words “runaway” and “bestseller” would ever be associated with it, let alone upon the cover of an American edition.”
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I am just geeky enough to truly love this book.

I loved it when it came out — Hubby bought it for me in hardback (and its sequel) — and, even though I haven’t picked it up in years, I found that I still laugh hysterically at the examples, and I find myself still being a complete and total stickler when it comes to punctuation. (Am I the only one who edits my friends’ Facebook statuses, if only in my head?)

So this is not quite a review. More of a love letter to Truss and her oh-so-funny look at punctuation. (And yes, I’ve gone back and checked and double-checked to make sure it’s all right. And it’s probably not.)

I think what I loved most was her examples. Sure, she pulled examples from literature, but she also would just throw things in as she went along. Like this (it’s my favorite):

Assuming a sentence rises into the air with the initial capital letter and lands with a soft-ish bump at the full stop, the humble comma can keep the sentence aloft all right, like this, UP, for hours if necessary, UP, like this, UP, sort-of bouncing, and then falling down, and then UP it goes again, assuming you have enough additional things to say, although in the end you may run out of ideas and then you have to roll along the ground with no commas at all until some sort of surface resistance takes over and you run out of steam anyway and then eventually with the help of three dots … you stop.

How can you not love that? Or this:

So it is true that we must keep an eye on the dash — and also the ellipsis (…), which is turning up increasingly in emails as shorthand for “more to come, actually … it might be related to what I’ve just written … but the main thing is I haven’t finished … let’s just wait and see … I could go on like this for hours …”

I also loved that, while it’s funny and accessible, you actually learn things. Or, at the very least, you’re reminded of things. Like the uses of apostrophes (or not). Or when to use the dash versus when to use parentheses. Or exclamation points! Or… (yeah, those things, too.)

Most famously of all, the apostrophe of omission creates the word “it’s”:
It’s your turn (it is your turn)
It’s got very gold (it has got very cold)
It’s a braw bricht moonlicht nicht the nicht (no idea)

But, learning aside, the best part of the book is really the geeky part. Truss is persnickety about punctuation, and it makes me laugh.

Now there are no laws against iprisioning apostrophes and making them look daft. Cruelty to punctuation is quite unlegislated: you can get away with pulling the legs off semicolons; shrivelling question marks on the garden path under a powerful magnifying glass; you name it.

Sticklers, unite!

LIbrary Loot 2010-04

I’m going to top last week’s pathetic loot because this week I didn’t even bother going to the library because I’m sick as a dog (where on e, instead sending K with a friend. All they brought back were my holds, so that’s what we have for the week.

This week’s loot:

Middle Grade books:
The Lost Conspiracy, by Frances Hardinge

YA books:
In the Coils of the Snake: Book III — The Hollow Kingdom Trilogy, by Clare B. Dunkle
Going Bovine, by Libba Bray

Adult Fiction:
Storm Glass (Glass, Book 1), by Maria V. Snyder

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Mr. Darcy Broke My Heart

by Beth Pattillo
ages: adult
First sentence: “The taxi pulled up outside Christ Church, and I climbed out of the backseat, but the scorching July heat stole my breath and the threatened to press me back inside the cab.”
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Claire is one of those long-suffering heroines that readers tend to either really identify with or supremely hate. Since her parents’ deaths when she was 18, she has done everything in her power to help her younger sister, Missy. Claire sacrificed her education, getting a GED and foregoing college. She sacrificed a good job: most recently she was an office manager for a pediatricians’ office, and has been recently laid of. She’s been unlucky in men, settling for Neil, a sports enthusiast who, while nice enough, may not even know that Claire’s off to Oxford, in her sister’s place, for a week-long seminar on Pride and Prejudice.

It’s only once Claire’s across the pond that all she’s sacrificed comes plainly into view. She meets James — suave, polished, gorgeous, rich — and immediately falls for him. In addition, she meets Harriet, of the Formidables (a society devoted to keeping Austen’s secrets), who lets Claire on a big secret: she has the original copy of First Impressions, the novel P&P is based on. As Claire reads on — noting the substantial changes from the final novel — she finds similarities to her own life (funny how that happens), and ends up doing some major soul searching. It’s a happily-ever-after, but not the one that you were expecting.

I should be jumping and cheering: the average Joe gets the girl! (Sorry. Spoilers there.) Claire goes with the normal, the everyday, and finds happiness. Yet… Claire is so insipid that I could hardly stand her enough to get through the novel. She eventually finds a backbone, but not before she goes through pages and pages of waffling. Sure, she’s still grieving over the loss of her parents — or rather, she’s suppressed the grieving process in favor of responsibility — but we’re never really given much of a chance to connect with her on that level. But what really bugged me was the significant changes to the P&P story. Sure, it’s nice to imagine that a copy of First Impressions could be out there, and sure it’s plausible that the story would be radially different from the final P&P, but it just didn’t work for me. At all. Period. I skipped those pages, cringing at the attempt to capture the magic that is Jane Austen.

As the characters in the novel eventually figure out: some things are better left untouched.

Something I’ve Been Meaning to Do Anyway

And along comes a challenge to help me with it. It’s the POC Reading Challenge. It’s an easy one, too: sign up for a level — in my case, Level 3 (7-9 books) but I’m aiming for Level 4 or 5 — and commence reading books. I’m going to keep a running tally here (starting now).

Where the Mountain Meets the Moon, by Grace Lin
Peace, Locomotion, by Jacqueline Woodson
Shine, Coconut Moon, by Neesha Meminger
Sugar, by Bernice L. McFadden
Marching for Freedom, Elizabeth Partridge
Two Moon Princess, by Carmen Ferrerio-Esteban
Skunk Girl, by Sheba Karim
The Prince of Fenway Park, by Julianna Baggot
A Step from Heaven, by An Na
Mare’s War, by Tanita S. Davis
Claudette Colvin: Twice Toward Justice, by Phillip Hoose
Girl in Translation, by Jean Kwok
Marcelo in the Real World, by Francisco X. Stork
The Red Umbrella, by Christina Diaz Gonzales
One Crazy Summer, by Rita Williams-Garcia
Zora and Me, by Victoria Bond and T. R. Simon
Bamboo People, by Mitali Perkins
The Lost Hero, by Rick Riordan
Shooting Kabul, by N. H. Senzai
Out of My Mind, by Sharon Draper
Tortilla Sun, by Jennifer Cervantes

Front and Center

by Catherine Gilbert Murdock
ages: 12+
First sentence: “Here are ten words I never thought I’d be saying…”
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I adored both Dairy Queen and The Off Season. Really, I did. But… maybe it had been too long since I read those books. Maybe I really wasn’t in the mood for D.J. (which surprised me, because she is one of my favorite characters). Maybe there was something just off about this book, because while I enjoyed it, I just didn’t love it like I did the other two books.

We basically pick up where we left off in The Off Season: D.J.’s back at school after taking a month off to help her brother Win after his injury. It’s not easy being back: for one thing, she can no longer hide on the sidelines. For another, basketball season is starting and there is major pressure on her to pick a college and verbally commit. Not to mention her coach breathing down her neck about showing “leadership skills”. This is all overwhelming for D.J., who’s used to just basically sliding by.

Perhaps it was this waffling D.J. that grated on me after a while. While I recognize that she’s always been shy as a character, for some reason the arc of this book — with D.J. finally realizing how to believe in herself — was a bit much for one book. Granted, there was a sub-plot with a love triangle between D.J., her former boyfriend Brian, and her current boyfriend Beaner. Again, while it was enjoyable, there was too much waffling and agonizing for my taste. Then again, it may be just that it’s been too long since I was in D.J.-land. I do wonder if I had read this right after the other two, then maybe I would have liked it more. Because I do think it’s a fitting stopping point (not really an end…) to D.J.’s story.

Sunday Salon: Unsung YA Books

I’m a little late to this party, but since Kelly at YAnnabe made the suggestion that I throw my hat into the ring, I haven’t been able to stop thinking about it. So, my two cents about the best YA books you’ve probably never read.

The Order of the Odd-Fish, James Kennedy: I keep plugging James’s book, but you aren’t reading it. Why? Seriously, people, read this book.

Nothing But Ghosts or House of Dance, Beth Kephart: if you haven’t experienced the lyricism that is Kephart’s writing, you really ought to.

Flygirl, Sherri L. Smith: a quietly feminist book, one that makes you want to stand up and cheer!

Secret Keeper, Mitali Perkins: a book about love, a book about India, a book about sisters. Almost perfect.

Two Parties, One Tux, and a Very Short Film about the Grapes of Wrath, Steven Goldman: Clever, snarky, and geeky extraordinaire. Can’t go wrong with that.

Saving Juliet, Suzanne Selfors: Yeah, it’s fluff. But it’s fun fluff, and it’s fun to see how it works with the Shakespeare.

Fly By Night, Frances Hardinge: Fuse #8 loves Hardinge, and for good reason: she’s a fabulous writer.

There you have it: my thoughts. What’s the best unsung YA book that you’ve read recently?

Unfinished Angel

by Sharon Creech
ages: 8+
First sentence: “Peoples are strange!”
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Some books stick in your mind because they have a brilliant plot. Some because they have created a fabulous world. Others because they have great characters, ones that you want to take home to your mother.

And others, still, because the voice — the way the narrator speaks to you, as a reader — is so unique, so endearing, that you can’t help but love the book.

The voice of Angel, the title character in this sweet little book, is wonderful. It’s not just the word choices that Creech uses, though that is a lot of it. Some of the words that just endeared me to Angel: peoplealities, surprisements, mishmaseroni, glompsing (I really love this one!), struddles. How can you not love a character who uses words like that? But if it was just a sprinkling of fun words throughout the book, it probably would have been more annoying than endearing. No, it was everything about Angel: from his/her irritation with yet love for the people in her (I’m not sure if it was a his or a her, but it felt like a her to me…) Swiss/Italian village, to Angel’s gradual acceptance of the crazy American girl — Zola, who is just extramarkable — and the village’s slow awakening to the sense of community.

Sure, I got all of that out of this as an adult, but I think what kids will see, and probably come to love, is Angel. It’s such an endearing character, and a captivating voice that it will keep practically anyone turning pages. The rest is just frosting.

My Most Excellent Year

A Novel of Love, Mary Poppins & Fenway Park
by Steve Kluger
ages: 12+
First sentence: “Since you’d never guess it from looking at me, nobody can tell that words like because, fart, there, and banana come out sounding like “becazz,” “faht,” “they-a,” and “bananer” when I say them out loud.”
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There are many things in my life that make me smile. Like:

Seeing these on the road:

Eating these:

Watching him:

And this book. This book made me unavoidably, undeniably, unabashedly happy.

It’s the simple story of a year in the lives of three high school freshmen: Bostonian and die-hard Red Sox fan (is there any other kind?) T. C. Keller (also known as Tony C and Tick but never, ever Anthony); his brother (in all ways except biology since age six) and diva extraordinaire (can you recite All About Eve word-for-word? I thought not.) Augie Hwong; and newbie Alejandra Perez, daughter of the former ambassador to Mexico and closet singer/dancer (who just doesn’t know how brilliant she is). It’s not like there’s a big crisis or a huge plot arc; this book is full of little things. Little things — like T.C. and Augie being brothers; or the discovery of Hucky, a six year old deaf kid that T.C. befriends; or the talent show and subsequent Kiss Me Kate production; or the three love stories, where there were no burst of passion, no sparkles, no in love at first sight, but instead just honest-to-goodness learning how to love and forgive and compromise. (Yeah, I know, I generally have a problem with lasting high school love, but this was just so darn adorable, that I forgave them the high school part.)

Sure, it’s unrealistic, but I plain didn’t care. I wanted to move in next door to T.C. and Augie and Ale. Shoot, I wanted to be a part of their crazy, wonderful, lovable extended family. (Much like the Cassons; I want to be a part of their family, too.) And I didn’t want this book to end. Which, really, is the best thing I can say.

Library Loot 2010-3

Both K and I are cranky today, so all we did was go in, find books (not many movies, much to our displeasure), pick up our holds, and get out.

It must be January.

This week’s loot:

Picture books:
Puffling, by Margaret Wild and Julie Vivas
How Do You Wokka-Wokka?, by Elizabeth Blueme/Illus. by Randy Cecil
I Will Surprise My Friend! (An Elephant and Piggie Book), by Mo Willems
Dear Vampa, by Ross Collins
Never Smile at a Monkey: And 17 Other Important Things to Remember, by Steve Jenkins
Waiting for Winter, by Sebastian Meschenmoser
Emmet, by Leo Politi
Magic Box, by Kate Cleminson
Catfish Kate and the Sweet Swamp Band, by Sarah Weeks/Illus. by Elwood H. Smith

Middle Grade books:
Where the Mountain Meets the Moon, by Grace Lin

YA books:
The Hollow Kingdom: Book I — The Hollow Kingdom Trilogy, by Clare B. Dunkle
Close Kin: Book II — The Hollow Kingdom Trilogy, by Clare B. Dunkle
Leviathan, by Scott Westerfield (M is in the mood for it now.)
The Singing: The Fourth Book of Pellinor (Pellinor Series), by Alison Croggon
Darkhenge, by Catherine Fisher

Non-Fiction:
Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation, by Lynne Truss
Charles and Emma: The Darwins’ Leap of Faith, by Deborah Heiligman

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10 Questions for Rosanne Parry

I was completely captivated when I read Heart of a Shepherd last month, and was more than happy when the book made the Cybils shortlist for Middle Grade fiction. I totally agree with what Sherry at Semicolon wrote when she called it “a treat to be savored.” It very much is. And because I wasn’t willing to let the book go just yet, I thought I’d contact the author herself, and she graciously consented to be interviewed. There really isn’t much more to say, other than if you haven’t read the book, you should.

MF: Heart of a Shepherd is your first published novel! Congrats! It’s not your first book, though, is it? Can you tell us a bit about the process of writing a picture book versus a novel?

RP: I think picture book writing has more in common with writing poetry than writing novels. You have to make every single word rich and precise and useful. Which I think, in the long run, helps me write what I hope are richer novels.

In my picture book, Daddy’s Home, we ended up changing the order of events so that the action was spread out through the child’s house, which is visually more interesting. In a novel, my words carry the weight of bringing the setting to life. I think picture books work best when some of the character and setting decisions can be made by the illustrator. For example, in Daddy’s Home the text does not mention the gender of the main character, the ages of the siblings, the race or economic situation of the family or the presence of a Mommy. All of that I left to my illustrator. David Leonard did such a lovely job conveying the warmth and exuberance of the preschool reader. I love what his art added to the book.

MF: What was your initial inspiration for Heart of a Shepherd?

RP: Ten years ago, I wrote a sonnet for poetry month as I try to do every year. At the time, my son was six and my dad was teaching him to play chess, so I wrote a practice piece about that. A few years later, I got an idea for a short story about grandfather and grandson playing a game of chess which eventually became the first chapter of Heart of a Shepherd. I set that story on a ranch in Eastern Oregon because I had recently visited a friend in Malhuer County.

MF: Heart of a Shepherd is an interesting combination of things one wouldn’t think would “go” together: religion, East Oregon ranching and the Iraq war. How/why did that combination come about?

RP: I began writing about a boy and a grandpa on a ranch but there wasn’t enough energy in the two of them to sustain a whole novel, so I added the military family element and the two seemed to compliment each other well. I’ve found both the army officers and the ranchers I know to be surprisingly philosophical and to have a strong sense of stewardship for the people and animals in their care.

As for the inclusion of religion, that was a matter of being true to my characters and setting. Ranching and soldiering are not professions that attract atheists. These families are far more likely to be church-going than the general population. Malhuer County, where the story takes place, was settled primarily by Irish and Basques. These are people for whom Catholicism is not just their faith, but an important part of their cultural identification. Many stories don’t need to mention their character’s spiritual lives, but leaving that element out of this story was just unthinkable. Some people’s lives only make sense in the light of their faith and HEART was just that kind of story.

MF: I read that it took you seven years from idea to finished book. Can you tell us a bit about that process?

RP: Seven years is a tad misleading. I wrote a poem from which the initial scene of the book was drawn about ten years ago. I set the poem aside and did nothing with it for ages because I was working on another story at the time. A few years later I wrote the short story, which eventually became the opening scene of Heart of a Shepherd. I liked the story very much, but since I was in the middle of writing a different book, I set it aside once again.

Eventually, I wrote three more stories with Brother and his grandpa, but then I got completely stuck. Fortunately, Random House editor Wendy Lamb critiqued the stories at an Oregon SCBWI conference and was warmly encouraging of my efforts. She didn’t say what I needed to fix so much as what sparked her interest. The setting was one she seldom saw in submissions, and she enjoyed the warm and loving rivalry among the five brothers.

So I went back to the story, adding the military family element. All together, it took me two years of intensive study, research and writing to come up with a draft of Heart of a Shepherd I was satisfied with. From there I sent it to Jim Thomas at Random House and he made an offer on the manuscript in September of 2006, which was about seven and a half years from the starting point. Once the book was under contract it took another two and a half years to get it in print. It was a surprise to me that it would take so long, but I’ve since learned that it is a typical time frame. In fact, I’m very grateful to have an editor willing to give me the time I need to make my book just right.

MF: Do you have a favorite character or scene in the book?

RP: When I ask students what they want me to read out loud, they almost always choose the “boys against the girls” part. It’s a very fun scene to read aloud, especially to a group of kids. It was one of my editor’s favorites, and I can imagine that he was once a lot like Brother in this particular part of the story. For my part, I often feel like throwing things at him, so it’s a favorite for me as well.

MF: I found the book to be deeply religious, though that could be what I brought to the book. Is there anything you hope, in particular, readers will get out of your novel?

RP: I think that part of what makes reading such a rich experience and writing such a surprising profession is that people bring their whole life to every book they read so that it is a different experience for each reader. I got a lovely note from a teenager who said HEART helped her think of her family’s all-consuming ethnic restaurant business in a whole new way. Wow! I’d have never made that connection but family businesses whether it’s a farm or a store or a restaurant share some of the same stresses and benefits. It’s kind of cool to see what different readers bring to the experience.

If I have an agenda at all, it’s literacy. Young readers, and particularly those who struggle to read, need characters that speak to their life experience. Military families and ranching families are seldom depicted in children’s fiction. One of the most moving things that happened to me this year was the day I spent addressing an adult English language class at a local college. Mine was the first novel any of them had read in English, which felt like such a huge honor and responsibility. I was very proud of the team at Random House who packaged the book with a page lay out that is very inviting for a struggling reader and a cover that an adult can read on the city bus with dignity. Those details matter and I’m thrilled to have a publisher who is so attentive to them.

MF: Is being a writer something you’ve “always” wanted to do, or is it something you discovered later in life? Do you have any specific writing influences?

RP: I hated writing when I was a child, and I was not especially good at it, but I’ve always loved making up stories. When I was home full time with a house full of toddlers and preschoolers, I finally had the time to work at writing stories and I spent the next ten years learning to write like a storyteller.

MF: Who or what inspires you?

RP: The need to put four kids through college is pretty much all the inspiration I need.

MF: That certainly is inspiration! Do you have five books that you think everyone should read?

RP: Here are some books I’ve read recently which I really enjoyed.

  • When the Whistle Blows, by Fran Cannon Slayton
  • Marcello in the Real World, by Francisco X. Stork
  • The King of Attolia, by Megan Whalen Turner
  • Krik Krak , by Edwidge Danticat
  • Crash Into Me, by Albert Boris
  • poetry by ee cummings
  • Our Town, by Thornton Wilder
  • The Wee Free Men, by Terry Pratchet

MF: That’s an impressive list! if you don’t mind telling us, what’s up next for you?

RP: Yesterday, I sent my next novel SECOND FIDDLE off to the copy editor. It will be out in the spring of 2011. It’s a story about three girl musicians living in Berlin at the end of the Cold War. They find a Soviet soldier who is being murdered by his own officers. They rescue him and run away to Paris. It has been great fun to write. I was in Paris myself almost exactly twenty years ago so it has been fun to revisit my memories of that trip.

MF: That sounds interesting; I can’t wait to read it. Thank you so much for your time!!
RP: Thanks again for the interview.